Lost Treasures (Chinese version updated)

After all the setbacks, finally the demo of the ONARA RPG is finished --

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Chinese Version Key: u0y0

This is the first time I am making an RPG game and there are many things that I'm not confident at. The worst one is probably the text. I'm not very good at English, but I braced myself to finish this. I hope everyone understands what the game is talking about, and if you can help me improve it in the final version, I would really appreciate that.

After the demo, the progress of the game making will be upgraded regularly on this blog, and hopefully it will come out at the beginning of next year. (I'm now afraid of making promise, but I will try my best.)

Thank you all and enjoy!

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> The download link is not working.
Repaired.

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Download link isn't working for me either

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Hello Aero, I've been a fan of yours for quite some time, and like many other's the thought of you and 13o making a game together... well it blew my mind. I'm downloading the demo now in fact. If you'd like ill play it through and message back with any grammatical errors. I can't say I'm the best at translating but if you'll give me the chance I'm going to shoot for gold. Thank you for your time, and thank both you and 13o for an amazing game.

- Zero.

PS: Sorry about a possible duplicate message, my pc freaked out at me when i tried submitting this a minute ago.

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That was AMAZING! Cecilia and Plum are adorable! Any chance of a gassy skunk girl party member in the future? This was definitely worth the wait, and I'm very excited to see what you guys do next with this rpg. :) Thank you Aerodynamics and 13o, you guys are the saviors of the female fart fetish community, keep up the great work! ^^

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I finished the demo and let me say this one thing... I love Lavender, she is adorable, Cici and Plum are too... but Lavender FTW. Playing through the game I took notes on what each character and wrote down the errors or just better ways of saying it. Here it is:

Opening screen errors.

Blonde with flowers and pink cap.
"I still remember when the vampire came to me, my brain was like ... all blank! I just blindly slashed everywhere!
Almost died."

Better way:: "I can still remember when the vampire came at me, my mind went all... blank! I just blindly slashed everywhere, I almost died!"

"Look at what we got! What do you think? Does this stuff have that strong of energy?
You know those rumors..."

Better way: "Look at everything we got! What'd you think? Does this stuff really have energy that strong?
You know what those rumors say..."

red-haired girl with green bandana:

"That's becuase you were touching everything you see.
But yeah, it was exciting. Just like in dream."

Better way: "That's because you were touching everything you could see.
But yeah it was exciting, just like in a dream."

"Let's sleep. Tomorrow we will be back to town. We can celebrate till then."

Translated: "Let's sleep for now. Tomorrow we'll be back in town. We can celebrate then."

(When witch girl enters.)
"Hello? who's that there?"

Better way:"Hello? Is someone there?"

Witch girl: "Hey, don't be so aggressive. This is our first meet, but I really need to thank you."

Better way:"Hey don't be so aggressive. This is our first time meeting, but I really should thank you." or "Hey don't be so aggressive. This is our first meeting but I really need to thank you."

" For discovering the treasure. You know. The, Lost, Treasure."

Better way: "For discovering the treasure. You know, The Lost Treasure."

"Oh really? How about you taking this~"

Translated; "Oh really? How about you take this~"

"Not being arrogant anymore?"

Better way: "Not being so arrogant now, are you?"

After the opening.

Reyna:
"I'm Reyna, an adventureer from the western continent.
My occupation is rogue."

In this case rogue being an occupation should be capitalized as it's being used as a proper now to name something.

Better way: "I'm Reyna, an adventurer from the western continent.
My occupation is Rogue." Or...

"I'm Reyna, an adventurer from the western continent.
I work as a Rogue.

Treasure Hunter could be used in place of Rogue in the second case.

"Well... it's not a noble occupation, but unlike other people who does dirty theif jobs, my dream is to discover all the amazing treasures in the world!"

Better way: "Well... it's not a noble occupation, but unlike other people who do dirty, theif jobs, my dream is to discover all the amazing treasures in the world!

"And the most powerful ones, also called as "the most precious of the precious", are the Lost Treasures."

Better way: "And the most powerful ones, also referred to as "the most precious of the precious", are the Lost Treasures."

"A few days earlier, a team found a suspected Lost Treasure in an abandoned castle in deep forest."

Lost treasure gets cut off by the box and if deep forest is an area it should be capitalized to Deep Forest.

Better way: "A few days ago, a team supposedly found one of the Lost Treasures in an abandoned castle, deep within a forest."

"People the realized that the treasures only being heard of in stories probably do exist.
Hearing those rumors, I came to Breeze."

Better way: "People then realized that the treasures only heard of in stories might actually exist.
Hearing those rumors, I came to Breeze."

(After talking to Old Man)

"Haha, geezer, doesn't that sound like a death flag?"

Not really sure what this is supposed to mean, but in English it sounds out of place. Perhaps "Haha, geezer, doesn't that sound like a rumor itself?" Would be more appropriate

(After hearing about the reward for rescue.)

"Reward?
I-I mean salvage? I can help with that."

Better way:
"Reward!
I-I mean rescue? I can do that."

(After leaving the bar.)

"Oops. I boasted too much...
Errr, How can I find a teammate?
Well, I'll just walk around."

Better way: "I shouldn't have boasted so much. Err, how can I find a teammate? I guess I'll just walk around..."

(After Cecilia uses her gas.)
"Guh!!!!
*Cough Cough*
The smell... is stinky... and choky...."

Better way:
"Guh!!!!
*Cough Cough*
The smell... is stinky... and chokey"

(After Cecilia wants to die.)
"Becuase you saved me and protected me.
Haha, I didn't look awesome just now. I know. hanks to... what's your name?"

Better way: "Becuase you saved and protected me.
Haha, I didn't look awesome just now I know. But thanks to... what's your name?"

"But I still feel headache! Guh!"

Better way: "But I still feel like I've got a headache, guh!"

Red haired girl to the left of the bar:

"During the adventure, you will meet various monsters, and perhaps got various states.
Do you want to hear?

Better way: "During an adventure, you will meet various monsters, and perhaps get various states.
Do you want to learn about them?"

Yes:
Dizzy: "Dizzy reduce your target rate and effectivenessof defence."
Stench: "If you were adheres by stench, your agility will drop dramatically. If you receive fire damage the stinky gas will burn and the damage will be multiplied."
Paralysis: " If you got paralyzed, you lose one round of action."

Anus: "If your anus got blocked you are unable to use fart skills."

Better way:

Dizzy: "Dizzy will reduce your hit rate and your defense."

Stench: "If you get covered in Stench, your agility will drop dramatically. If you receive fire range the stinky gas will ignite and the damage will be multiplied."

Paralysis: If you get paralyzed, you lose a turn.

Anus: "If your anus gets blocked, you will be unable to use fart skills."

Red haired knight:
"Compare to big magic cities, I prefer this quiet little town, but it's getting crowded recently."

Better way: "Compared to big magic cities, I prefer this quiet little town, but recently it's getting crowded."

Nun in the church: "The treasure of strength, is said to be made of the power of a vampire."

Better way: " The treasure of strength is said to be made from the power of a vampire."

Cecilia:

Mutated bat round two: "Actually... I can make this by myself. Can you please find somewhere else?"

Better way: "Actually... I can do this by myself, can you please go somewhere else?"

(When Reyna regains consciousness.)
"I'm sorry, becuase we were in dnager just now, I used a m-m-magic that hurted you..."

Better way: "I'm sorry, becuase we were in danger just now. I used m-m-magic that hurt you..."

Item shop lady says iten shop.

Old man: "I heard that the team of Allen, the blade warrior has found the Lost Treasure. If everything went well, they should be able to return to town today."

Better way: "I heard that a team led by Allen, the blade warrior, has found one of the Lost Treasures. If everything went well, they should be back in town sometime today."

Joseph: "Haven't you heard? Well, I just got the news, too."

Better way: "Haven't you heard the news? Well, I just got is myself..."

"Not only the treasure got stolen, but they also got stuck on the mountain."

Better way: "Not only was the treasure stolen, but they were also stranded on the mountain."

(After Reyna says she can handle the job.)

"You....
You are a girl, and looks alone..."

Better way: "You...
You are a girl who's alone."

"Reyna, we still don't know who the attacker is. It's probably very dangerous. it has also been said that the attacker's trick is very insidious. This is a class A quest. You must find at least a partner. No negotiation"

Better way: "Ma'am, we still don't know who the attacker is. There probably very dangerous. it has also been said that the attacker's technique is very insidious. This is a class A quest. You at least need a partner, no discussion."

"Be careful! if you got any news, tell the mayer immediately!"

Better way: "Be careful! If you get any news, tell the mayor immediately!"
Green haired map person:

"It is not peace recently.
Lots of rumors about the treasures."

Better way: "It is not peaceful lately with all these rumors about the Treasures."

Quests:
Rescue: Steps: "Explorer the field and try to find a teammate" Should say "Explore the field and try to find a teammate."

I hope these corrections help Aero, again this game is absoultely amazing and has soo much potential.
Good luck moving forward.
-Zero

Forgot something lol :P

Do you guys need a beta tester?
-Zero

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> Do you guys need a beta tester?
> -Zero
Many thanks for the revisions!!That's exactly what we need! I have written them down.
Yes, we absolutely need to polish the words in the final version, and beta testers are also needed!
Although the translation may start later, I'll thank you in advance. Please always support us!

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> That was AMAZING! Cecilia and Plum are adorable! Any chance of a gassy skunk girl party member in the future? This was definitely worth the wait, and I'm very excited to see what you guys do next with this rpg. :) Thank you Aerodynamics and 13o, you guys are the saviors of the female fart fetish community, keep up the great work! ^^
Thanks! There are skunk girls as enemies, but I will consider making it as a party member.
This is only the beginning so there are lots of more exciting things in the later part of the game. Please always support us!

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That was great! The art was lovely, and the battle CGs were on point.

The translation definitely needs a second pass by a native speaker, and maybe a thesaurus. "Stinky" is a cute word but maybe the adventurers should sound tougher. But it's a demo for a reason! I look forward to all future updates.

Are there plans to give random encounter enemies fart attacks or special scenes?

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It's finally here! I've been a long time supporter of 13o's Patreon and have been eagerly awaiting some more content. Woohoo!

If you need anything

No problem Aero, you've always got a supporter here:)

I'd love to be a translator/tester for this game if you need one.

-Zero.

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Great demo

That was a really good demo, you and 13o make a great pair of fart lovers~ After beating it I took a peak into the files and found some facesitting pixels. Can't wait to see them implemented if they will be and also more of the fox and dog from the title screen <3

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> That was great! The art was lovely, and the battle CGs were on point.
>
> The translation definitely needs a second pass by a native speaker, and maybe a thesaurus. "Stinky" is a cute word but maybe the adventurers should sound tougher. But it's a demo for a reason! I look forward to all future updates.
>
> Are there plans to give random encounter enemies fart attacks or special scenes?
Thanks superdude! 13o's drawings are really great!
Some random enemies will have fart attacks.

Re: Need some help with english?

> Do you need some help with English? Then pick me , I'll help you with your English. Helping to improve your English for the game will be no problem. What do you say?
Yes, I do need help. Thanks in advance. I plan to begin the translation after I completed the game, but, do you know Chinese? If you do, then the translation can go along with the making process!

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> That was a really good demo, you and 13o make a great pair of fart lovers~ After beating it I took a peak into the files and found some facesitting pixels. Can't wait to see them implemented if they will be and also more of the fox and dog from the title screen <3
Thanks! Please wait patiently~ They're coming!

Amazing start

This is a great demo! I absolutely love it. I know you already have volunteers, but I'm happy to help polish up the English even though I don't speak a bit of Chinese. And really, don't worry too much about it -- it may not have sounded like a native speaker, but there was never any danger that the player would misunderstand what you're saying.

I am going to disagree with bageltoast, though. I think skunk girls sound far better as opponents than party members.

Keep up the good work! And thanks for sharing the demo.

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The game is great and thanks for making it! Do you happen to have the Chinese version? I would really like to play it in Chinese.

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I really had fun playing the demo. Looking forward to the final version :)

I should mention, despite the typos the translation was quite spirited! The drawn characters felt like they had their own voices, which avoids a common problem with translation. Keep up the good work!

Tight Game

Cool Beans.

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I can't play the game, it won't open when I try to open it. It shows errors. What do I do to fix this?

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I just finished the demo. Simply amazing! You guys put a lot of work into this game. I love your twist on onara attacks by including the characters in the attack.

I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to seeing it completed. Keep up the great work!

You know, I'm kinda curious. What's your favorite part of the game so far Aero? Mine is when Cecilia marks Reyna with her gas in the Vampires Castle.

-Zero

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> This is a great demo! I absolutely love it. I know you already have volunteers, but I'm happy to help polish up the English even though I don't speak a bit of Chinese. And really, don't worry too much about it -- it may not have sounded like a native speaker, but there was never any danger that the player would misunderstand what you're saying.
>
> I am going to disagree with bageltoast, though. I think skunk girls sound far better as opponents than party members.
>
> Keep up the good work! And thanks for sharing the demo.
Skunk girls really are getting anticipation! I have to make them the strongest bosses.
I feel warm that I got so many volunteer in translation, but I will definitely give you the skunk girls part!
Thank you, Skunkchaser!

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> I don't know Chinese but I can correct the spelling mistakes that you made. Would you like me to correct the spelling mistakes for you?
Thank you very much for the help. The translation may begin later this year after I finish the beta version. Can I contact you then?
By the way, the game that my friend made is 80% finished. I have no time to translate it(Big game) but I will release a walk through video in this weekend.

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> I really had fun playing the demo. Looking forward to the final version :)
Knowing that you're having fun is the greatest thing for me!

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> I should mention, despite the typos the translation was quite spirited! The drawn characters felt like they had their own voices, which avoids a common problem with translation. Keep up the good work!
Yeah! Thank you so much for the encouragement! I feel motivated.

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> Cool Beans.
Thanks!

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> I can't play the game, it won't open when I try to open it. It shows errors. What do I do to fix this?
Do you have the error message?

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> I just finished the demo. Simply amazing! You guys put a lot of work into this game. I love your twist on onara attacks by including the characters in the attack.
>
> I really enjoyed it, and I look forward to seeing it completed. Keep up the great work!
It's great that you enjoyed it! That's the reward to me!

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> You know, I'm kinda curious. What's your favorite part of the game so far Aero? Mine is when Cecilia marks Reyna with her gas in the Vampires Castle.
>
> -Zero

That's a good scene! Reyna and Cecilia started to develop a nice relationship~
It's hard to choose a favorite scene. If I have to say one, I would choose the scene in the hidden quest.

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> The game is great and thanks for making it! Do you happen to have the Chinese version? I would really like to play it in Chinese.
No problem, I will upload the Chinese version later.
Are you Chinese? If so, you can join our QQ group to discuss it: 462777640

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Yes I get over 100 error messages like this:

Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\libGLESv2.dll
Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\d3dcompiler_47.dll
Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\www\js\rpg_managers.js

It says that for like every file when I try to run the game

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I think it is good idea adding fart skill named 'heal fart' to cici. maybe it is Conversion of Ideas :)

What happen?

I can't visit your Onedrive at China now!(I proxy!)But anyway,This game is expect.Thanks!

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日本語でもお願いします!

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> Yes I get over 100 error messages like this:
>
> Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\libGLESv2.dll
> Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\d3dcompiler_47.dll
> Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\www\js\rpg_managers.js
>
> It says that for like every file when I try to run the game

You have to extract the files from the compressed file.

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> I think it is good idea adding fart skill named 'heal fart' to cici. maybe it is Conversion of Ideas :)
I'll just keep it mysterious for now.XD

Re: What happen?

> I can't visit your Onedrive at China now!(I proxy!)But anyway,This game is expect.Thanks!
It exceeded the downloading limit. It seems that Onedrive is not good for massive sharing.

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> 日本語でもお願いします!
皆から助かる願望をたくさんもらいましたので、ありがとうございます!
日本語バージョンはできるんですと思いますが、DEMOは和訳できません、すみません。

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I was just looking thru the games files and noticed that there are hundreds of sounds that I never even heard before in the game, for some reason it's the same sound for a lot of the attacks, magic and farts. Why is that?

A Lost Treasure

After seeing with my own 2 eyes and ears the greatness that is the game I have to you guys are really onto something here. Small moments like The Snail Girl really bring a level of uncertainty that keeps you on your toes, The Title Screen, Environments, Music, Ambience, Everything feels so Well done and professional I forgot this was Fetish RPG. The Potential for this game could Transcend that of even PWS and everyone who's played and seen that game knows how it was one of the 1st Onara RPGs to set the Bar High your guys might be the Next. But Enough Rambling! All and All you guys definitely have my support and I can't wait for the Full-Flege Release!

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Is this only for win32?

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> I was just looking thru the games files and noticed that there are hundreds of sounds that I never even heard before in the game, for some reason it's the same sound for a lot of the attacks, magic and farts. Why is that?
RPG Maker MV didn't output properly, so I copied all the material in the project folder. Some of them were not used.

Re: A Lost Treasure

> After seeing with my own 2 eyes and ears the greatness that is the game I have to you guys are really onto something here. Small moments like The Snail Girl really bring a level of uncertainty that keeps you on your toes, The Title Screen, Environments, Music, Ambience, Everything feels so Well done and professional I forgot this was Fetish RPG. The Potential for this game could Transcend that of even PWS and everyone who's played and seen that game knows how it was one of the 1st Onara RPGs to set the Bar High your guys might be the Next. But Enough Rambling! All and All you guys definitely have my support and I can't wait for the Full-Flege Release!
Thank you so much!

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> Is this only for win32?
It is for both win32 and win64.

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oh ok, because i also have that error when i try to extract the files which says: Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\libGLESv2.dll . Not sure how to make it work :/

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> oh ok, because i also have that error when i try to extract the files which says: Lost Treasures - EN - Demo.7z: Unknown method in Lost Treasures - EN - Demo\libGLESv2.dll . Not sure how to make it work :/
You mean you can't extract the files???

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我是一名中国人而且我英语不好...扯远了
我知道做RPG游戏的不容易因为我自己也做过光是脚本和事件就很麻烦而且13o是画师所以所有的游戏制作过程
估计都是由Aerodynamics完成的并且这是你的处女做所以就算不好也是正常的
我不知道你们用了多久但至少不少于3个月(不包括作画)
所以如果有什么脚本和事件等程序上面的需求我希望我能帮上忙

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> 我是一名中国人而且我英语不好...扯远了
> 我知道做RPG游戏的不容易因为我自己也做过光是脚本和事件就很麻烦而且13o是画师所以所有的游戏制作过程
> 估计都是由Aerodynamics完成的并且这是你的处女做所以就算不好也是正常的
> 我不知道你们用了多久但至少不少于3个月(不包括作画)
> 所以如果有什么脚本和事件等程序上面的需求我希望我能帮上忙
RPG maker 的模块化做的并不好,多人合作有一定困难。
现在能帮上忙的有一些游戏系统的设定,比如装备啊,技能啊这些东西,你能帮忙想想那是最好不过了。

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> Hello, just wanted to give my personal feedback, this is an AMAZING game, I have played a lot of this kind of games and let me tell you this was a fresh air (no irony intended XD), it's really cute (art style and character personalities), I'm digging the plot so far (can't wait for the school part where you may probably find bullies, and that skunk part you mentioned :3), the music is good, the difficulty is just right so you don't need to super focus on grinding to continue the history but you do want to check everything to get enough level, chests, events, etc. And let me tell you seeing the kind of art from both of you in a game adds a pleasant familiar feeling to it, so anyway I don't wanna ramble for too long, just wanted to thank you for your time and effort because it's really paying off. Btw if you are interested in spanish translations I can help with that, don't know much about programming but I can translate, anyway have a great day :)
Thank you for the feedback and offer for translation! I'll think over it after I finish the game. Have a great day, too!

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Can't download,please upload to deviantart or mediafire,please,thank you

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For those who have trouble opening/extracting rar files, you might have to update your win rar to the lastest version. The demo is great aerodynamics and 13o, thanks for the amazing work. 👍

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The demo is pefect, especially level design. By the way I puzzeld at Undercave 1 because one big crack that on right down wall looks like a portal for next floor. I spent 30 min at there to pass the crack. Haha. It's not important thing but I think that big crack gives a confuse so it should be change small crack one. (If there anything rude word or grammar wrong, please forgive me. I'm not good at english.) Really thanks to good game Aero bro! (And i want translate it to korean. Can I fix demo file for it?)

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> The demo is pefect, especially level design. By the way I puzzeld at Undercave 1 because one big crack that on right down wall looks like a portal for next floor. I spent 30 min at there to pass the crack. Haha. It's not important thing but I think that big crack gives a confuse so it should be change small crack one. (If there anything rude word or grammar wrong, please forgive me. I'm not good at english.) Really thanks to good game Aero bro! (And i want translate it to korean. Can I fix demo file for it?)
Thank you for pointing that out! I removed that hole. If you know how to use RPG maker , feel free to edit and translate it!

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Mobile access

Is there anyway to play this on a phone or tablet?

Re: Mobile access

> Is there anyway to play this on a phone or tablet?
You can try some PC game simulator maybe?
I may not have the ability to make the game compatible with phones.

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> 个人认为可以加入几个人外因素作为支线你以前也说过喜欢臭鼬娘的
> 所以我认为可以参考至于装备方面我暂时还没想到
> 技能可以增加几个负面状态的屁
> 支线剧情的话正在在业余时间构思好了我会回复希望能作为参考
谢谢反馈。
人外相关的当然有加入,可以期待一下。负面状态的屁也会有各种。其实每个屁都会有一定概率触发负面状态
如果有剧情的想法可以讨论啊,先提前谢谢了。

I really really liked this demo. I hope that blocked status means a fart game maker is going to venture into some kind of anal, even if it is just a dildo in the butt.

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> I really really liked this demo. I hope that blocked status means a fart game maker is going to venture into some kind of anal, even if it is just a dildo in the butt.
I'll just keep it a secret right now~

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Aerodynamics

Author:Aerodynamics
Anime Girl Fart Fetishist.
女の子のオナラがすきです。
ときどきMMDでオナラ動画を作ります。
日本語が苦手ですから、いつも英語で返信します。

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